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Friday, July 26, 2019

My Holiday


















3 comments:

  1. Great effort with your holiday writing Jason. Good detail and interesting to the reader. Please use capital letter I, not i.
    Also if you re-read and ask a buddy to read to check you have full stops in the right places. Well done!

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  2. Hi Jase , i LOVE your description , great Job on winning your latest Soccer game!! really enjoy playing Roblox with you to buddy!!

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  3. Wow Jason its Dad here!! I've just found this blog of yours and WOW!! it's really good and really cool. I am so glad to see you doing such great work, writing so well, expressing yourself so clearly and in such an interesting way. Keep up the good work Jason!! and now I know of this page I cant wait to see more of your awesome stories and informative accounts of things you have done...Your right Jason, Going to the park was fun. Now that the weather is slowly improving we must do more fun activities. Maybe we can take out the go kart and your motorbike!?!, then you can write another great story(blog) about that too.. Keep writing Jason, keep reading, keep trying your best!! and your best will get better and better...and soon with time spent wisely you will become a pro at what ever you choose. Practice makes Perfect Jase. That's how people get good at things..You can too!!

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