We had to write a story about anything. I choose the war it had to have a orientation and a problem and a solution.
I am a student at Hornby High School. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Friday, July 5, 2019
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A fantastic and quality war story. I love the fact it was in Egypt, which we studied. You have an interesting problem and solution too! Very well done.
ReplyDeleteHi Jase, wow!!! I was so IMPRESSED by this story about war!! I am so happy they got out safe in the story'' it took me on a journey ... it was intense !! GREAT job .. Mum
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