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Tuesday, September 24, 2019

Jason Persuasive Writing Playground equipment


   We had to make a letter to our principal about playground   equipment. :D


2 comments:

  1. WOW Jason.I really like that you have put some thought into this idea.Putting glass around the playground so the teachers can keep an eye on the children is a great idea.The only problem I have with that is,what would happen if some one threw stones?

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  2. This is a nicely organised piece of writing Jason. I also like your ideas. Ka Pai!

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